Pandora's: Blog 13: CATW # 5: How to Do One Thing at a Time: "The authors most important ideas in 'How to Do One Thing at a Time' by Nancy Jones of the women's health magazine is knowing multi-tasking i..."
The author has great examples in her essay, especially the one with her mom on the phone while driving. Their word choice is very strong except for the word "dumb". But their are some areas that need improvement, her summarizing is almost there but needs more supporting ideas. There should be an introduction stating your claims to be introduced in your body paragraphs. As her claim could be multitasking can be very harmful to people and children because of ..... then you can give your examples and causes of why you believe that.
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